"If we turn our heads and look away and hope that it will all disappear then they will - all of them, an entire generation of people. And we will have only history left to judge us."

- George Clooney
April 30, 2006, Washington




A Beginning of an End - Prologue

Author: Shadowkin
Genre: General
Rating: G
Score: 4.31579  
Story: Harry lay awake, staring at the ceiling. His life had changed so much in the past few years and so had he. He found himself thinking of his friends, of Ron and Hermione. They had played a part in his life too. His thoughts drifted to Ginny and his feelings for her. He couldn’t let any of it get in his way, he reprimanded himself. He had to be focused on the task at hand. But his thoughts kept straying. To Dumbledore, who had given his life for Harry, and Snape, who had taken it. Hatred rose up within him, a dark, immense force, driving his will.

Harry got out of his bed with a start. He had to find the other Horcruxes, he just had to! He walked over to Hedwigs cage, where the snowy owl would usually rest. She was gone now, off with a letter to the Ron. He knew she would find him. He had been staying at Sirius’s house since coming back from Hogwarts and his sixth year. His house. The loss still ached deep within him. Sirius. He stood before his mirror, taking in the image of the sixteen year old boy who had lived through so much. So much where others had not. He was taller now, his frame broader and more muscular. He still retained his uncontrollable, jet black hair and startling green eyes. Yet he was a different person. He had to do something. With a sudden whirl he turned and grabbed his father’s cloak from a nearby chair and swung it on. He disappeared from view instantly. He slowly opened the door and crept down the stairs.

Mindful of Mrs. Black’s portrait (and any others in the vicinity) he moved towards the room where he kept his suitcase and extra clothes. The house was not empty and he knew he could be caught any moment. No.12 Grimmauld Place had been the headquarters of the Order of the Phoenix for two years now and its members still moved in and out at will. Harry knew that Tonks was upstairs and Kingsley was in the room adjacent to the one he was creeping into. His breathing was laboured with the effort of being quiet. The rest of the Order were out on missions, their activities had been furtive and misdirected in the wake of Dumbledore’s death and were only now becoming coherent. Pushing the aged door aside, he eagerly reached inside for his stuff. He grabbed what clothes he could and some gold and shoved them into the suitcase. He could only hope that the Order would not be able to track him. Everything would be ruined if they did. He had been thinking on his plan for weeks now. The time was right he had decided. It could not wait longer. Grabbing the trunk's handle, he apparated from the room with a small pop.

He didn’t know the area he had arrived in very well. He had only recently learned how to apparate properly and the Order had seemed suspicious at his motives for learning it. A dusty road stretched before him into the impenetrable darkness. There were pinpricks of light in the distance, lights that may have been buildings. He could only remember bits of it and knew it mostly from stories he had heard and books he had read. The wind blew icily across him and he drew his cloak closer to him. The trees rattled behind him, the wind a low moan.
Harry pulled out his wand and muttered, “Lumos”
A globe of light appeared at the tip of his wand and illuminated the area around him. He stared at the place, daunted by the gaunt, sinister look of it. Low bushes framed the road and were in turn backed up by a small forest of trees. He tried to take it all in and recall something, anything, but his mind refused to divulge a single thing. Eventually, after what seemed hours, he shuffled forward across the road toward one of the nearer seeming buildings. Before he reached it he stopped. The light of his wand had revealed a sign in the path in front of him. Harry held his breath. The sign read “Godric’s Hollow”.
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abz
very interesting, i dunno if its wot JKR has in ming tho!
hp-luvr-gurl
intresting thoughts about the 7th book. i really liked it, keep writing!

i liked it. i thought it was well written, and it does have alot of potenial. u have an intetsting choice here. if you write more, you might give away some of the book by accident, and u might want to stop writing, to leave the reader to guess what might happen next. i usually dont like those endings, but it might work here, for what really happens is going to be revealed when book 7 comes out. if i were u,i wouldnt write any more.id stop here. but...its not my descion

i liked it. i thought it was well written, and it does have alot of potenial. u have an intetsting choice here. if you write more, you might give away some of the book by accident, and u might want to stop writing, to leave the reader to guess what might happen next. i usually dont like those endings, but it might work here, for what really happens is going to be revealed when book 7 comes out. if i were u,i wouldnt write any more.id stop here. but...its not my descion
MaL
i think it has great potential. awesome job!
abi
i think its gr8 so far
Gracie
I like what you have written so far. Your attention to detail is specific, but not so much as to were it overwhelms the reader. The only thing I was somewhat skeptical of was Grimmauld Place still being used as the headquarters for the Order, for the reasons of Harry's distaste for wanting to return in JKR's novels, as well as with DD's death in concerns with the possibility that it may not be protected by the Fidelius Charm anymore. Also, you described Harry as still being 16, so the use of magic and his apparation seem a little misplaced as well. (Although his age may just have been a typo.)
Saphira4411
great just i think he wouldve gone to bill and fleurs wedding first. youre a great writer though. Your style is much like JKR herself
hp candy
very interesting i agree with saphire4411 he would have gone to Bill and Fleurs wedding first and i look forward for more so dont stop
None Dobbywe
great it was terrific! but where are ron and hermione? they should be there
potter fanatic
great plot i loved it!
lord of the rings
i loved it... please write more!!!
fulatalent
You have definately got yourself off to a great start. I liked the feeling that you gave this peice. It was mysterious, yet a feeling of adventure lingered on. WRITE LOADS MORE!!!:)
Klee
Good fic
None Shadowkin
thanks for all the crits guys. this piece was more a spur of the moment thing. I didnt really research it properly. im glad you picked up the mistakes and stuff, il be sure to correct them in the next installment.
oliver lover (he is so sexy!)
If i could, i would have given this 10 stars! You are one of the few who keep the characters as JKR wrote them to be. You didnt make Harry some preppy, hot model kind of guy. He truly is his father's son, and you showed how the loss of so many people affected him. Excellente!! (thats spanish in case u thought it was a type-o) :-)
JM Troemel
Got to say this is one of the best one's on here. Really good
Elisabeth
You started out strong and ended even stronger. I think you are by far the best writer I read on this site! Keep up the good work!
michael moor
this is quit good. i quite liked the way the story went. please write some more pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeze
V's Girl
Ooo this sounds exciting. Plz keep writin.
*GinnyWeasley13*
Not bad! The only thing I would suggest is to make it longer, but other than that it's great!
None ugg
pretty good you should do one about neville and hannah abbot








 
 
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